Talk:Shek Kip Mei
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As part of the rewrite to improve the English, I have removed the following sentence:
- The people in those apartments shared one toilet
This is because I couldn't work out if it was one toilet per appartment of 5 people, one toilet per block of appartments or some other group? Please add it back if you know and can make it clear. Thryduulf 18:07, 15 December 2005 (UTC)
'Crimes' section
editThe section is entirely unsourced. Also, I am not convinced that the incident written about in the 'crimes' section has any great direct relevance to the subject. Other than the fact that the girl came to the area, the story appears to be only of tangential relevance and should be removed. If the incident is indeed notable, it would deserve its own WP article. Ohconfucius (talk) 03:05, 2 January 2009 (UTC)