Talk:Schneller Orphanage

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Pyrotec in topic GA Review
Good articleSchneller Orphanage has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 6, 2012Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 15, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Schneller Orphanage in Jerusalem, which operated from 1860 to 1940, had its own printing press, bindery, flour mill, bakery, carpentry, pottery factory, and brick and tile plant?

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Reviewer: Pyrotec (talk · contribs) 08:48, 4 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

I will review. Pyrotec (talk) 08:48, 4 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Initial comments

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I've now had a quick read of this article and at this stage of the review it appears to be at GA-level: it appears to be well referenced, well illustrated and comprehensive. I'm now going to work my way through the article in more detail starting at History, working to the end and then coming back to check the WP:Lead. The requirements can be found in WP:WIAGA. I suspect that will take another day or so. Pyrotec (talk) 11:57, 6 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • History -
Looks OK & compliant with WP:WIAGA.
  • Architecture & 20th century -
These two sections look OK & compliant.
However, ref 22 (Shepp, Jonah (11 December 2011)) has a broken link that leads to google search page and a 404 error - Sorry, the page you were looking for could not be found Showing related results for: http://archive.jordantimes.com/?news=15718
  • Military base, Development plans & Successor schools -
These three sections look OK & compliant.

Overall summary

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


A comprehensive, well written and well illustrated article on this topic.

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    well illustrated.
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
    well illustrated, some taken by the nominator.
  7. Overall:
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I'm awarding this article GA-status. Congratulations on producing a fine article and the photographs. Pyrotec (talk) 13:39, 6 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! Just to note that I searched for other sources to verify the information that I read in the Jordan Times article, but I cannot find anything as comprehensive. I can't believe they pulled it off their website within 3 months! Yoninah (talk) 13:57, 6 June 2012 (UTC)Reply
I was just about to send you a note, I don't need to now. Congratulations again on the article. Pyrotec (talk) 14:00, 6 June 2012 (UTC)Reply