Talk:Sawmill Fire (2017)/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by GhostRiver in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 21:59, 2 September 2021 (UTC)Reply


I'll be taking a look at this article! — GhostRiver 21:59, 2 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Infobox and lede

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  • "and then to extinguish"
  • "Footage of the fire's inception was released by the U.S. Forest Service at the request of a local news agency in November 2018, resulting in its causation being mocked online." → "When the U.S. Forest Service released footage of the fire's inception in November 2018 at the request of a local news agency, the cause of the Sawmill Fire was subject to online mockery."

Cause

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Fire

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Aftermath

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References

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General comments

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  • No stability concerns are present in the revision history
  • One picture (map) that is in the public domain and is relevant to the article
  • Earwig score is good at 9.9%

Putting on hold now, ping me if there are any questions. — GhostRiver 23:25, 2 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

@GhostRiver: Addressed the above. I've since writing the article acquired some more materials for #Aftermath about, well, the aftermath of the fire. Should I add them in now or would you like for me to refrain for now, and keep this review short? –♠Vami_IV†♠ 04:22, 3 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Vami IV: The article is is short enough that I wouldn't mind if you added them in and then I can take a quick look! — GhostRiver 13:35, 3 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
@GhostRiver: OK, done, and all in one revision. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 03:38, 4 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Vami IV: All the new stuff looks great, happy to pass now! — GhostRiver 14:59, 4 September 2021 (UTC)Reply