Talk:SEW Eurodrive
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Direwolf202 in topic deletion: text modul "multiple issues"
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deletion: text modul "multiple issues"
editI have removed the text module "multiple issues" because the article has been restructured, neutral sources have been added and linguistic changes have been made. Does anyone have any other suggestions for improvement? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yon.i (talk • contribs) 13:55, 12 March 2019 (UTC)
I'd say that while the information is good, it does read somewhat like an advertisement, or at least, the language isn't as we would want from an encyclopedia. Sentences like "It all started with..." aren't the best tone for Wikipedia. However, informationally, there doesn't seem to be anything severely wrong. Direwolf202 (talk) 20:19, 18 April 2019 (UTC)