Talk:Roy's Wedding/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 16:23, 30 September 2012 (UTC)Reply

Comments

  • Link The Office in the infobox
  • Where is the running time referenced?
  • Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
  • In the episode should be "In this episode"
  • In plot, "8AM" should be "8 am", as per MOS:TIME
  • % should be wrote out fully as "percent"
  • "On Twitter, David Denman" remove David as first mention is above, as per WP:MOS
  • Link NBC in ratings
  • " 6.8/10" write out fully
  • Ref. 1 has WP:DASH issues
  • How is Zap2it a reliable source?
  • Same goes for OfficeTally
  • Ref. 5 should have TVLine linked
  • Ref. 11: Double quotes (") should be single quotes ('), as per WP:MOS, and curly quotes should be regular, in ref. 11, 13
  • Why do some references have publishers and others don't?
  • Add alt text to the images

On hold until the issues are addressed. TBrandley 17:50, 9 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

I believe I have addressed all the issues NoD'ohnuts (talk) 06:09, 13 October 2012 (UTC)Reply
Actually, not all of them, but I got the ones you missed. Passing. TBrandley 14:45, 13 October 2012 (UTC)Reply