- This review is transcluded from Talk:Riverton–Belvidere Bridge/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: ---Dough4872 17:35, 15 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
Comments:
- "holding a load of 8 tons (16000 pounds) from Warren County Route 620 (Water Street) in Belvidere to former Pennsylvania Route 709 on the Riverton side.", changed "from" to "and connecting".
- Change "In 1825, on May 17" to "On May 17, 1825".
- "the Riverton–Belvidere" sounds colliqual.
- "did not accept any person to cross" sounds awkward.
- "the Delaware" also sounds colliqual.
- "Remnants of the bridge was hurdled downstream" needs to be reworded.
- The sentence "The festivities were canceled, and disappointed the visitors." is short and awkward.
- When in 1904 did the bridge transfer to the bridge corporation?
- "extensive repairs began to the 25-year old structure" sounds awkward.
- "The structure would face its final test in 1955": change "its final test" to "a test".
- "The Commission replaced the flooring, repairing or replacing of certain steel portions of the bridge, blast-cleaning and repainting the structure." is a sentence fragment and needs to be reworded into a complete sentence.
- Fix the link to Delaware Bridge in the crossings navbox.
I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 17:35, 15 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
- Done with all. The last one is not a GA requirement.Mitch32(A fortune in fabulous articles can be yours!) 20:01, 15 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
- I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 20:25, 15 December 2009 (UTC)Reply