Talk:Richard E. Holmes
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Needs to be bio article first
editWhile Holmes' enrollment at MSU was historic, this is first of all a biographical article and needs to focus on the man and his life. Given that, I think there is too much material about the dramatic integration battles preceding Holmes - that material should be part of the articles on the respective schools and young men. There is too much unsourced speculation about his thoughts and motivations, who might have influenced him, etc. How about some more facts? How many students did MSU have in 1965? How many were in his dorm? How did he deal with the isolation? Did he visit Dr. Conner regularly? What made him decide to stay on campus, given the isolation? Did the administration reach out to him? What was the national press coverage, or wasn't there any?Parkwells (talk) 19:28, 12 June 2015 (UTC)