Talk:Regioni-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:48, 22 October 2014 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:48, 22 October 2014 (UTC)

• No hyphen in The Regioni-class was a group
  • Good catch.
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Link naval architect
  • Added
• Strongly suggest saving the specifics of each ship for their own articles and give only the range of lengths/speeds, etc. here. Otherwise you're likely to get eyes glazing over.
  • Yeah, I had thought of that.
• Puglia had a deck that was only 25 mm (0.98 in) thick, though she had the same thickness Why "though" as it's also half the thickness of her sisters?
  • No, it's the same as her sisters - 50mm
• Don't really think that the bulk of the land action in the Russo-Japanese War took place in Korea.
  • Indeed, meant Manchuria
    • I think that you accidentally reversed these. The ship was in Korea while the fighting was in Manchuria.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:45, 23 October 2014 (UTC)
      • Whoops, that'll teach me to try to fix things when I'm wiped out after a long day at work...
• Don't forget the ampersand for the refs to match your notes.
  • Oops, added now.
• Why are you using years for refs that cannot be confused for other refs?
  • Sloppy copy-pasting from articles that had multiple editions of those refs :P
• Is there a year for the Public Health Reports?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:59, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Yeah, don't know why I forgot that. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 01:49, 23 October 2014 (UTC)