Talk:Raymond of Capua

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Alekjds in topic Kingdom of Naples

Bad translation

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This page has the appearance of a translated article that needs some fine tuning to turn it into good english. — RJH 17:38, 3 April 2006 (UTC)Reply

I have tried to start writing an article in clear English, but the present version is scarcely worth the effort. The translation seems to be the result of an ill working translating machine. In my honest opinion this article has at present no substantial independent value. Traiectinus 13:22, 19 May 2006 (UTC)Reply
I agree, at this point it is nonsense. Mapetite526 18:02, 6 October 2006 (UTC)Reply
same here. someone should just delete the article. the grammar is... well horrible :P i just deleted it. i made a backup, though, before hand, if my actions were, well.. stupid :P Pandy 17:41, 6 December 2006 (UTC)Reply

i have had a try at the grammar. it makes more sense. one of the sentences made no sense whatsoever so i have deleted it. Daiyounger (talk) 21:31, 11 March 2009 (UTC)Reply

I think I fixed the grammar issue, though I had to sacrifice a fair amount of nonsensical material in the process. I have also promoted the article to start class. Now to get the article cited... — AlekJDS talk 20:31, 4 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Kingdom of Naples

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From what I could tell in the article for Kingdom of Naples, the city of Capua in 1330 would have been a part of that kingdom. I could be wrong. Also, I figured it was a safe assumption that Nuremburg would have been a part of the Holy Roman Empire in 1399, the year of Raymond's death. Anyone who knows better, please fix the infobox. — AlekJDS talk 00:08, 5 January 2011 (UTC)Reply