Talk:Q27 (New York City bus)/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 18:10, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement

Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use  Done,  Fixed,  Added,  Not done,  Doing..., or  Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 18:10, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

To note, I am aware that the nominator, Kew Gardens, is on holiday, so again I ping our friend Epicgenius (talk · contribs) to help out. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 18:19, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Prose

• line in Queens, New York City, United States, "United States" feels out of place here.
  •  Done by @Epicgenius:--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
• via that street [...] along that street Obliterate.
  •  Done by @Epicgenius:--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
• Service on the route that became the Q27 service Delete the second "service"
  •  Done by @Epicgenius:--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
• Service on the route that became the Q27 started in October 1928 by the Z & M Coach Corporation This should be "was started".
  •  Done by @Epicgenius:--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
• [...] as part of Zone B (Flushing and Northern Queens). Expand on this; elaborate on the division of NYC into these zones.
  •  Done by @Epicgenius:--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
• New York City granted While technically correct, this makes it sounds like the whole city was in on the granting.
  •  Done by @Epicgenius:--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
• its former routes being turned over to city operation and its former routes were turned over to city operation.
  •  Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
• that New York City Transit Replace with "the NYCTA"
  • After 1994, it become publicly known as New York City Transit.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

GA Progress

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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