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editJust minutes ago I found in this article a passage that read as follows:
Where:[1]
- i = 1 to N (number of thermocouples)
- j = 1 to M (number of statistics per thermocouple)
- measured_value [i,j] = the [i,j]th statistic's value
- average_limits [i,j] = the average of the [i,j]th high and low limits of the statistic
- range [i,j] = the [i,j]th high limit minus the low limit of the statistic
I changed it to say this:
Where:[1]
- i = 1 to N (number of thermocouples)
- j = 1 to M (number of statistics per thermocouple)
- measured value [i, j] = the [i, j]th statistic's value
- average limits [i, j] = the average of the [i, j']th high and low limits of the statistic
- range [i, j] = the [i, j]th high limit minus the low limit of the statistic
One lesson is that whatever it takes to get nominated to be a "Good Article", it doesn't required much attention to standard Wikipedia style conventions. Then I corrected two links in the opening section in which every word began with an incorrectly capitalized initial letter.
So now I'm wondering: why does every word in the title phrase begin with a capital letter? Michael Hardy (talk) 04:01, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
- Hi Michael, thank you for the fixes and article review. The text was in capitals because I had initially thought these were proper nouns – at least in some of the books I have with me, they were. Now that you mention it, I did verify them, and have changed these to lower case. Regards, Zithan (talk) 15:06, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
Hello. When I said "the title phrase", I meant the phrase that is the title of the article: Process Window Index. Why do those three words have capital initial letters? Michael Hardy (talk) 18:22, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
- Not sure. That's what the sources say. Zithan (talk) 18:37, 2 January 2009 (UTC)