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Good job! Looks like the start of a really great article. --The Illusional Ministry (talk) 17:02, 28 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

Hey thanks! upstateNYer 22:22, 28 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

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Cant help myself ;-) You may want to look into adding about the Poestenkill Gorge (where the High Falls are) and the legend of the Native American who "kidnapped" a white girl and "married" her and hid out in a cave there along with some history of the various mills. You may want to talk about the gorge in the geography section. There are so many beautiful dams that today create lakes and waterfalls of their own you may want pictures of them too, Lake Ida behind the Stewarts at 2 and 66, with several very old dams along the Poesten kill within walking distance of there.

  • It would be tresspassing technically but there's a great waterfall on par with the ones you have pictures of (I think its called Fred's Hole or something like that?) out past Tamarac schools on Route 2, driving east there's an old abandoned bridge on the left past where the falls are, if you park there and walk over the bridge and follow the paths back the way you came you'll reach after about a 2 or 3 minute walk the top of the falls. I dont know if kids still go there and jump off the waterfall, but I went there once when I was 17 (all for a girl of course). If you cant get there that way there should be an official looking town-owned building before you get to the bridge, it sits (I believe) roughly right before where the falls and there should be a path from it to the bottom of the falls.Camelbinky (talk) 01:44, 8 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
There's a link for South Troy which goes to Troy, New York#Neighborhoods; but there is no such section on that article... are you planning on making one or did you think that it already existed? I can start on that section for you if you'd like.Camelbinky (talk) 01:39, 17 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
I just assumed there was a section. If you have the time, feel free to start the section. I'm feeling split; I really want to start bringing Troy up to snuff, but it means putting Brunswick on the back burner again. And the history section of Troy will be in depth if I want to do it right (and most likely require a break off History of Troy, New York, similar to the break off I'm working on for Brunswick). Decisions, decisions... upstateNYer 04:19, 17 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
I feel your pain! There are so many articles that I want to work on just because it would be fun to learn about them while doing the research for them, then there are articles that need to be finished because they are terrible. Oh, home computer is kaputz, so I might not be on much since I'll be using work computer only, will continue to do my best though.Camelbinky (talk) 22:19, 18 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
If you come back to working on this (and I hope you do because its really interesting!) this may be useful even though it is a blog, I think it could at least point you to other sources or lead you to search in directions you otherwise wouldnt have known to look (I find blogs very useful for that). The blogger on his profile lists "historian" if that is his actual profession for a living then the blog may even end up passing wp:RS criteria for self-publication.Camelbinky (talk) 02:00, 14 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 January 2023 and 10 May 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): TheNotSoQuiteMouse (article contribs).

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