Talk:Pickle Rick/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Some Dude From North Carolina in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add a short description and alt text to every image.
Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "by Breaking Bad" → "by the Breaking Bad" (both times)
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "Beth's unhealthy relationship with Rick, and Beth and Rick's views" → "Beth's unhealthy relationship with Rick and their views"
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "Danny Trejo (as Jaguar)".
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "It won" → "It won Rick and Morty" - the Outstanding Animated Program award was given to the show for this episode.
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Plot is less than 400 words so that passes WP:TVPLOT.
- Add a comma after "sets up a lab in the sewer".
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "group are" → "group is" (American English)
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "[14][15][16][17][18][19]" - WP:CITEBUNDLE please
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Check for ordering issues:
- "[9][5]" → "[5][9]"
- "[26][23]" → "[23][26]"
- "[11][2][22][26]" → "[2][11][22][26]"
- "[24][23]" → "[23][24]"
- "[30][26]" → "[26][30]"
- "[26][22]" → "[22][26]"
- "[26][2]" → "[2][26]"
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "a number of" is kinda wordy. I would suggest using "several" instead.
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "a breakfast cereal and in-game" → "breakfast cereal, and in-game"
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Scheeden - typo.
- Good spot, Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Good spot,
- Russian mobsters"[3] → Russian mobsters",[3]
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "relationship to" → "relationship with"
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "8.7 out of 10 in IGN".
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Where do the quotes "emphasized the pickle-ness" and "too adorable" come from?
- The (YouTube) video embedded in the given source ("Design Sneak Peek"). — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Vulture should link to Vulture (website) since it is the website version of a magazine.
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- The award table should be formatted for accessibility to screen readers. As a result, move the scope row to the "Award" category (see here).
- Had a go—does it look right now? — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
- Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
- Is that true? I could be getting mixed up between sources, but I don't think I've ever hit a paywall or article limit on Vulture. — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- That's it. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:38, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: thanks for the review! Couple of questions/replies and the rest are done. — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Bilorv: Great work; passing the article.
Interesting article to expand and an interesting read overall. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:08, 13 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Bilorv: Great work; passing the article.
