Talk:Pennsylvania Route 652/GA2
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Mitchazenia in topic GA Reassessment
GA Reassessment
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I took care of the NBI issues but the prose needs some cleanup - some excessive details, some tense issues, etc. For example:
- "There is a short clearing, serving some residential homes and intersected with an unnamed local road, where it leaves Indian Orchard." - so the clearing leaves the town?
- "Route 652 continues to the northeast out of Indian Orchard, where the surroundings of the highway became more open" - became?
- "residential homes"?
And so on. I was going to take care of it myself, but the issues seem to be more significant. I'm putting this on hold for the standard 7 days, or longer if work is being done. --Rschen7754 22:52, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
- Also the Yahoo ref needs to be replaced. --Rschen7754 22:54, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
There. Mitch32(Scenery is fine — but human nature is finer.) 18:05, 18 October 2015 (UTC)