Talk:One Night's Anger

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Iaof2017 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 19:11, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply


Infobox

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  • Alt needs a better description
  • Remove CD from the formats as that wasn't a standalone release

Lead

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  • was issued → was first issued
  • Hersi → see more on overall
  • Add something from the critical reception

Background and composition

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  • Fine

Critical reception

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  • outspoken → given

Music video and promotion

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  • For further promotion, she appeared to perform the song at various radio and television shows → when?

Festivali i Këngës

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  • Fine

Copenhagen

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  • The image doesn't add anything to the article, so please remove it
  • and three accompanied → and was accompanied by three
  • On stage, they performed → who is they? Does it include Hersi?
  • If the latter is true than the first sentance of this paragraph should merge with the last one

Track listing

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  • Fine

Release history

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  • Fine

References

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  • Refence five is dead

Overall

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@MarioSoulTruthFan: Done.--Lorik17 (talk) 15:52, 6 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
I did some changes see if you are ok with them and let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:46, 6 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Great, thank you alot!--Lorik17 (talk) 18:36, 6 May 2020 (UTC)Reply