Talk:Not My Baby/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 10:47, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
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Very quickly that we meet again, nice looking article on first glance and I'll review to find any issues soon. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:47, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Remove wikilink on Freedo in the infobox under producer per WP:OVERLINK
- "is a song recorded by Romanian" → "is a song by Romanian"
- "issued as a" → "released for digital download as a"
- "Junior Oliver Frid and" → "Junior Oliver Frid, and"
- "whilst the latter was credited" → "while the latter received credit"
- "under his stage name Freedo" → "under his stage name of Freedo"
- "Reviewers noted "Not My Baby" to be a" → "The song was noted as being a"
- "song, as well as a" → "track, as well as a"
- "of the singer's Spanish" → "of Inna's Spanish"
- "Spanish sixth studio album," → "Spanish studio album" since we don't need full context in the lead and also remove the year from the brackets
- "Inna had already retransitioned" → "The singer had already retransitioned"
- "with "Bebe" that same year" → "prior to the song with "Bebe" in 2019"
- "The lyrics of "Not My Baby" delve" → "The lyrics of the former delve"
- Target Music critics to Music journalism as the earlier target should be removed
- "lyric video for the track" → "lyric video for the song"
- "uploaded to her" → "uploaded to the singer's"
- "on 2 April" → "on 2 April 2020"
- "released on 24 April" → "released on 24 April of that year"
- "seeing Inna with a snake" → "including Inna with a snake"
- "reviewer further pointed out similarities to the" → "reviewer further pointed out similarities between the visual and the"
- "Commercially, "Not My Baby" peaked" → "Commercially, the song peaked"
- Mention that the chart is Romania
- "in May" → "in May 2020"
Background and composition
edit- "produced the song under his stage name Freedo" → "solely produced the song under his stage name of Freedo"
- "released "Not My Baby" as" → "released "Not My Baby" for digital download as"
- Wikilink English language to itself
- "from her Spanish" → "from the Spanish"
- "her sixth studio album," → "her sixth studio album" since it's not the lead
- "Lyrically, it touches on" → "Lyrically, the song touches on"
- "relationship in which" → "relationship, in which"
- "was attractive yet selfish" → "was attractive but selfish"
- We don't target to hashtags on pages so target verses to Verse (music) instead
- Mention how many verses there is, maybe?
- There is sadly no source that provides this information. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:48, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
- Target synthesized to Synthesizer
Critical reception
edit- Mention the chart position in here and retitle the section to Reception
- "Upon release, "Not My Baby" was received with positive reviews by music critics." → ""Not My Baby" was met with universal acclaim from music critics."
- "best releases in recent memory" → "best releases in recent memory, by April 2020" or something similar to specify "recent" timescale
- "noting its high" → "noting the high"
- Remove wikilink on remix
- "the latter pointed" → "the latter reviewer pointed"
- "that—while Inna had taken musical inspiration from her older releases—the" → "that while Inna had taken musical inspiration from her older releases, the"
- "jokingly stating that it" → "jokingly stating that the song"
- "called the song "perfect [...] for driving, for " → "called the former "perfect" for driving, "for"
- "which—according to the reviewer—gave "Not My Baby" its" → "which he claimed gave the song its"
- "He also concluded that the track" → "Krusch concluded that the song"
- Mention the chart position at the end of this section, but don't start a new para as it's only one sentence
Music video
edit- Img needs alt text
- "from the track's music video" → "from the music video"
- Add fullstop to end the img's text
- Wikilink lyric video to itself
- "created by Mihai Sighinaș was uploaded" → "was created by Mihai Sighinaș and uploaded"
- "depicts the singer" → "depicts the latter"
- "and a snake while being" → "and a snake, while being"
- "video directed by Bogdan Păun was eventually" → "video, directed by Bogdan Păun, was ultimately"
- "It commences with Inna" → "The visual commences with Inna"
- "as she sports a" → "while she sports a"
- "As the music video ends" → "As the video ends"
- "leopard-print bra, and a" → "leopard-print bra and a"
- "swimsuit alongside knee-high" → "swimsuit, alongside knee-high"
- "Currinn of CelebMix called Inna" → "Currinn called Inna" since you have already introduced this reviewer
- "in the music video" → "within the music video"
- "for leaving a" → "of leaving a"
Track listing
edit- Good
Charts
edit- Good
Release history
edit- Target Digital download to Music download
- Target Global to Global Records
References
edit- Make sure all are archived using the tool
- Copyvio score looks good
- Remove wikilink on YouTube for ref 3
- Should be spelt as YouTube on ref 10
- Ref 11 is missing the publisher
Final comments and verdict
edit- Quite a thorough article, On hold for now despite the good work! --Kyle Peake (talk) 17:03, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for the review. I have solved all your comments except for that one comment. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:00, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: ✓ Pass, as one brief lack of an inclusion isn't too high of importance. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:18, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for the review. I have solved all your comments except for that one comment. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:00, 9 May 2020 (UTC)