Talk:North Carolina Highway 124

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Ncchild in topic GA Review


GA Review

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Reviewer: 420Traveler (talk · contribs) 16:57, 6 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Review

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Review coming soon. -420Traveler (talk) 16:57, 6 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Upgraded to C Class! -420Traveler (talk) 17:00, 6 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Lede

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  • I would add last sentence in first paragraph up further. Example: "Entirely within Edgecombe County, it travels east from NC 42 near Bridgersville......"
  • Describe US 258 as "U.S. Route 258 (US 258)"
  • I'd say northeast of Bridgersville because that's how it looks on a topo map, but I may be wrong.
  • "until 1963 or 1964" would "until sometime between 1963 and 1964" sound better?
  • In infobox, I would put circa 1933 since it was between 1931 and 1933.

Route description

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  • Once again with Bridgersville.
  • Also, will need a topo map reference for Bridgersville since Google doesn't show it.
  • "NC 124 begins by" Remove the word "begins".
  • "It intersects" change the "it"s to something else.
  • "At the intersection, NC 124 turns to the northeast. It continues for 3 miles (4.8 km) through a rural area to its eastern terminus at NC 42 and NC 43 near Cobbs Crossroads." I would remove "At the intersection" and combine two sentences.
  • "3 miles" change to "three miles"
  • Put references in order.
  • Add link to Annual average daily traffic.
  • For Google reference, make the map pop up as satellite map.

History

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  • Put references in order.
  • "6 miles" change to "six miles" for all under 10.
  • Add current state map as a reference after last sentence.


"Travelled six miles" add in approximately or roughly. Then I'll pass it. -420Traveler (talk) 15:53, 8 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

@420Traveler: Both should be done! Thank you once again for reviewing! Ncchild (talk) 02:16, 9 June 2022 (UTC)Reply