Talk:No Russian/GA1

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:41, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

Remember, no Russian. JAGUAR  19:41, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

• "gameplay footage from the level was leaked on the Internet" - you sure you want to capitalise internet?

According to the Internet article, the word is capitalized. I'm not entirely sure if it should be, but it's a pretty minor point that I don't think is worth fretting over

• The lead is perfect; is summarises the article well, so not issues here

• "However, the player is never forced to partake in the massacre, and may instead let their comrades kill the civilians" - I think it's worth mentioning that the only objective of this level is to "follow Makorov's lead" (if you can source it)

Sadly, no of the sources mention that you only have to follow Makarov. All they say is that the player is never forced to kill the civilians and that they'll die anyway

• "they will then get into a firefight with armed military soldiers" - I think all soldiers are from the military, so how about just soldiers or special forces. If I remember my CoD lore, they were probably just armed police

The source I used for that statment says "SWAT-or-local-equivalent response", so I just left it at armed soldiers

• "A screenshot taken from "No Russian". In the screenshot..." - The caption is repetitive; I would get rid of the first sentence, as it is clear what level it's from

Done

• " the game's developer and publisher respectively" - try the game's respective developer and publisher

Done

• "and Stephen Lowe, the retired Bishop of Hulme, felt that the level was sickening" - this should be quoted

Done

• No dead links
• No dab links

This article is well written, well sourced and compact. Once they're all clarified then this should pass. JAGUAR  19:51, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Alright, all issues have been addressed. Thanks for the review! Famous Hobo (talk) 20:33, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for addressing them so quickly! Don't worry about the internet thing. Let's promote this JAGUAR  20:44, 2 August 2016 (UTC)