Talk:New York State Route 185/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Juliancolton in topic GA Review
GA Review
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- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- The prose is decent, but it needs some work. Some examples: The route heads eastward, going along the shores of Lake Champlain as Bridge Road. - "Going" is a rather casual and encyclopedic word. Just after the western terminus, there is a fork in the road, the left of which is NY 185, the right of which is for a road to a housing development. - This needs to be reworded. After passing houses and forestry, Route 185 begins to approach the Champlain Bridge. - Is there any location where the road doesn't pass houses? I suggest removing that part of the sentence. In terms of MoS, {{commonscat}} should be in the external links section.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- References are good for the most part, but prior to being renumbered to its next designation, NY 910L. needs a citation.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Any history prior to designation?
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Images look good, but the caption for the image in the history section needs a full stop
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
A decent article overall, but there are some issues, which are listed above. On hold for now. –Juliancolton Happy Holidays 19:09, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
- All done. Thanks!Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 01:49, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
- Looks good; the article passes. –Juliancolton Happy Holidays 01:56, 20 December 2008 (UTC)