Talk:Netherlands at the 2014 Winter Paralympics
![]() | Netherlands at the 2014 Winter Paralympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 16, 2018. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Kees08 (talk · contribs) 18:58, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
Should the NPC be in Dutch in the sidebar?
Hedging your bets on the hyphen? thirty-four seconds and one minute twenty seconds
Maybe use their ages instead of the birthday
capitalize Parade of Nations for the parade of nations during Ref after punctuation and the super-G[12][13], Too many short sentences in a row: Anna Jochemsen was born in 1985.[20] She entered all five standing races in alpine skiing. She was classified as an LW2. | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
Non-GA Comment: put refs in numerical order if you feel like it: [36][31] | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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Flag is fine File:Bibian Mentel-Spee.png is a screenshot of a YouTube video, marked for Creative Commons, CC BY. This license is fine for Wiki, so everything is fine here. | |
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- Corrected everything mentioned so far, Kees08. Courcelles (talk) 13:16, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
This is pretty cool if you have not seen it.
Not sure if you can work this in or this. You might be able to write about how the race went (like he slid out during the first turn (note: I forget which turn he slid out on) and into the wall). With the low amount of sources in the Paralympic Games, we should probably make use of the videos to find out what happened for the DNF and DQs the best we can. Can you look for them for the other athletes as well, and try to describe what happened? Kees08 (Talk) 08:34, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
- I'm having major display problems with this article... spaces are there in the code, but not displaying, pipes are not there in the code, but are displaying... can you check the actual Wikitext and see if any of these errors are real or if they're all MediaWiki bugs? Courcelles (talk) 12:18, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
- Fixed everything, some with unorthodox solutions, this is ready for another look, Kees08, Courcelles (talk) 15:01, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: I think it was because a table header was moved above a paragraph. I moved it where it should go and removed the non-breaking spaces. I added a few more comments above as well, I can give it a final once-over when those have been addressed. Kees08 (Talk) 06:28, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- As to the hyphens, twenty is a normal noun, while thirty-four is a compound noun, properly taking a hyphen. All the rest addressed, Kees08. Courcelles (talk) 17:33, 14 May 2018 (UTC)