Talk:Mr. Stain on Junk Alley
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![]() | On 14 July 2024, it was proposed that this article be moved from Mr. Stain to Mr. Stain on Junk Alley. The result of the discussion was moved. |
New info Added
editI have written a sketch of the other characters and added a few u missed out
also the official site link has been updated(the previous one was dead)
i'll be adding an info box and other citations Binarymoron (talk) 17:40, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
No info on Kimono Beauty
editthere seems to be no info on the Kimono girl anywhere!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Binarymoron (talk • contribs) 10:35, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
scratch that, watched episode #3
Binarymoron (talk) 16:18, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
Characters And Production
editThe characters section is in the process of expansion and the Producion section will be added soon(just as soon as I get any material related to it).Binarymoron (talk) 17:30, 14 January 2008 (UTC)
Done first part Binarymoron (talk) 17:25, 16 January 2008 (UTC)
Removing Tags
editthe following tags are being removed
1. Cleanup
2. Copyedit
3. Expert attention
please re-add the tags if you feel they are needed.
Failed GA
editMostly on prose issues. Here's a sample...
- Please format the refs in a consistent manner, eg using {{cite web}}
- DoneBinarymoron (talk) 14:19, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
- No, the comment means that they all need the same information in a consistent manner - for internet refs please make sure they all give title, publisher and date retrieved, plus author if known. For example Current Ref 31 only has the title (About Ryuji Masuda) and does not give the publisher or date accessed, or on the review's I would give the reviewer's name as author (assume you are using {{cite web}}). I fixed ref 2 to switch to the actual title and moe the publisher into the publisher = field, so it now reads " "Ga-Ra-Ku-Ta: Mr. Stain on Junk Alley (TV)". Anime News Network. Retrieved on December 30, 2007." Ruhrfisch ><>°° 17:18, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
- "as the items that Stain (or Palvan) find" - find --> finds
- "Beautiful Lifa, from inside the mirror, beckoning to Handsome Stain(not in picture) at the end of episode fourteen." - her name is just "Lifa", so use that, and you need a space before the brackets open
- Done Her name is Beautiful Lifa, in character listing after the fourteenth episode her name is mentioned as Beautiful Lifa. Binarymoron (talk) 14:19, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
- "He also befriends a large" - rmv "also"
- "can be seen in an episode or two" - the prose is rather informal...also ref 9 isn't very clear
- changed wordings to "can also be seen", could you elaborate on how it is unclear? Binarymoron (talk) 14:50, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
- Don't worry about the ref, you've answered that with the ref 10 note below. dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 00:09, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
- "The rest of the characters appear only once or twice in important roles" - once or twice --> occasionally, etc
- Ref 10 doesn't link to the characters section...
- the site is a flash module and on the flash module character section has to be clicked no separate url can be provided for the section since it is embedded into the main page Binarymoron (talk) 14:50, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
- OK, that's fine then. dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 00:09, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
- "One touching episode is Heavenly Bird" - very very POV wording...
- Done sourced to reviewer Binarymoron (talk) 14:50, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
- Images at the top of the Episodes section aren't needed
Not doneBinarymoron (talk) 14:50, 7 March 2008 (UTC)- It's fair use overuse and adds very little to the article. dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 00:09, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
- "CGI production is well done" - unsourced POV
- The reception section could really be expanded
Not doneBinarymoron (talk) 14:50, 7 March 2008 (UTC)- *shrug* up to you. dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 00:09, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
Please leave a note on my talk page if you have any questions, or if you'd like me to take another look. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 11:15, 5 March 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not going to pass this as a GA or re-review, but if you want to renominate, I won't stop you, though I encourage the next reviewer to look at the stuff not done here. dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 00:09, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
GA Review
editGA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This is a very poor example of an anime article and is very far from being a GA level piece. A lot of work, as noted blow is needed. Failed as a GA and fixed assessment back to Start.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- Contains weasel words and non-neutral language.
- B. MoS compliance:
- Article needs to be cleaned up and properly formatted and organized per the Anime and Manga MOS. Most sections are out of order. There are some sections that don't belong and need to be removed, such as the Staff section, which goes against the MOS and project section. The DVD section is badly formatted. The episode list fails the MOS and is missing some of the most basic episode data. The references are very poorly formatted. There should be one reference per <ref></ref> tag, not multiple as is seen in ref #13. Several references are repeated multiple times giving the appearance of the article having more references than it really does. References are shoved in the lead rather than being properly listed in the appropriate sections (currently missing) which should have additional details. Fails WP:LEAD.
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Multiple unreferenced statements
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Biased in favor of the series is evident in several sections, particularly the reception section where no criticisms are noted and in the plot section.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Article contains excessive non-free images that provide no critical content to the article but act as decoration (tagged for non-free). Also has an image of living persons of questionable necessity/purpose.
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Video quality
editHaving viewed the disc I note that the episodes are not presented in anamorphic but in 4:3 letterbox.. This may be due to an error on FUNimation's part, but it means both the original text of this article and the review on which it was based are wrong. Lee M (talk) 20:14, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
Fifteen episode
editHi Wikipedia editors, i have a genuine question regarding this anime: Is its fifteen episode "Creator" canonical enough to be considered in the episode list? 186.78.138.254 (talk) 02:41, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
Rename
editRequested move 14 July 2024
edit- The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The result of the move request was: moved. Moved as an uncontested request with minimal participation. If there is any objection within a reasonable time frame, please ask me to reopen the discussion; if I am not available, please ask at the technical requests page. (closed by non-admin page mover) BilledMammal (talk) 05:48, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
Mr. Stain → Mr. Stain on Junk Alley – Proper title of the show. 176.249.151.251 (talk) 05:12, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
- Note: WikiProject Comedy and WikiProject Anime and manga have been notified of this discussion. 98𝚃𝙸𝙶𝙴𝚁𝙸𝚄𝚂 • [𝚃𝙰𝙻𝙺] 22:41, 14 July 2024 (UTC)