Talk:Moloko language
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Isand4 in topic WikiEd Students: Respond to Peer Feedback
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Wiki Education assignment: The Study of Language
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 August 2022 and 1 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mnamuduri, Cbries2, Isand4, Adia09 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: MingzeGaojmart460, Emartinez203, Muh tee us?, Rica35, 23alexx, SonaniVandan, Sduran2, Ak24000.
— Assignment last updated by UICLing (talk) 19:32, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
I renamed the notes section on the article to be the references section.Mnamuduri (talk) 20:08, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
WikiEd Students: Respond to Peer Feedback
editStudents: Respond to your peer feedback by posting what changes you will make and what should be made to the article based on your peers' suggestions. Click "reply" below to respond. @Mnamuduri, @Cbries2, @Isand4, @Adia09 UICLing (talk) 16:33, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
- We received a lot of great comments on our progress. The most important thing is adding more content to the characteristics of the language itself (Phonology, Morphology, etc.) I did see someone comment that we should try and add a few pictures, so I can try and look for some. I'm thinking of finding a map to visualize where the language is spoken if possible. There are a few sentences in the intro that are not cited so we should maybe try and add that too. Cbries2 (talk) 02:54, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
- The insight my peers have provided in their peer evaluations has given me direction and clarity. Their suggestions have influenced what I want to add to the article and how I want to present it. Specifically, I will work on adding information to the section on phonology. By reading the source provided to me, I have learned that my assigned language, Moloko, is unique with respect to vowels and how they are realized phonetically. In addition to phonology, I think that more can be added to the section on morphology. Isand4 (talk) 18:51, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
WikiEd Students: Peer Review
edit- Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
- Yes. Everything in the article is relevant to the topic. There was nothing that distracted me.
- Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
- Yes. The article is neutral and the sources used are from neutral organizations.
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
- No. There is not enough information on the page yet.
- Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
- Links to citations work, even if some are behind a paywall. With a cursory glance at the sources I was able to find support for claims in the article.
- Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
- There are two sentences that are not referenced, however they are followed by referenced sentences. Specifically this sentence...
- The Melokwo (8,500 speakers) traditionally inhabit the Moloko massif, an inselberg isolated in the plain, east of the Mandara Mountains, between the Mayo-Mangafé River and Mayo-Ranéo River.
- There is no citation for the information regarding the location of the "Moloko massif".
- Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?
- The information contained in the article seems up to date.