Talk:Mississippi Highway 500/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by SounderBruce in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: SounderBruce (talk · contribs) 03:38, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
Will do later tonight or tomorrow. SounderBruce 03:38, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
Comments
edit- Lead
- Any reason the map using an orange highlight instead of a red one?
- The second sentence in the lead is quite short, I suggest merging it into the first part of the next sentence.
- Made a few changes. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- "paved in asphalt"...should it be "with"?
- Route description
- Shouldn't the traffic count be placed after the route description?
- I've seen people ask me before to put it as the first thing in the section, so I'll leave it here. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- I suggest mentioning that MS 487 intersects MS 13 at the north end of Lena
- Combine the Lyle Street and Ealy Road sentences
- "Large forest" is kind of strange, I suggest "forested area"
- Yeah, much better. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- Are all these little intersections that notable? This can be slimmed down a bit.
- I only mentioned the ones where the road travels in a different direction. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- "Crosses a small bridge over Sweetwater Creek" should be "crosses Sweetwater Creek [on a small bridge]" (the last part is optional and wholly redundant)
- An unincorporated area really can't have a "center", I suggest using the name Tuscola instead.
- "and beyond" to where?
- History and the rest
- "helping with connecting Lena" → "helping connect Lena to MS 35"
- Being "published in the state map" isn't notable and shouldn't be attributed in this way
- "The road was in the process of being paved" should be changed to "Paving of MS 500 began in 1961"
- "and the remaining" should be "and the remainder" or "and the remaining segments"
- Changed to "remainder." Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- No need to add a reference in the Major intersections prose (also it gets spaced out by the template)
- Removed, but I think it's a bug in {{jcttop}}.
- References look good.
- I suggest removing the External links section if there's nothing to put there. SounderBruce 22:51, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
@SounderBruce: All fixes made. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- Looks good. Passing. SounderBruce 23:14, 4 June 2018 (UTC)