Talk:Mauricio Pellegrino
Latest comment: 7 years ago by 77.130.195.16 in topic Honours list
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editThe infobox says that he's at Inter, the article states that he's at Liverpool. He can't be at both. danno 02:14, 25 June 2010 (UTC)
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editThis article still needs a complete overhaul and was clearly written by a non-native English speaker. It would probably be quicker to say what is correct, but the following phrases/sentences are not good use of English:
- After playing nearly one decade with
- he spent the vast majority of his remaining career
- amassing La Liga totals
- with which he won
- he conquered nine in his spell in his country (I have no idea what that means)
- had a six-month stint
- he embarked in a managerial career
- during a large portion of the 90's
- lived its golden era
- He had his first abroad experience
- would be fairly used during the campaign
- ended with league conquest
- with the addition of
- His main dark spot
- he was a very important defensive unit
- amassed 213 official appearances
- having an unassuming stint
- picked for the squad
- made his debut precisely
- stayed connected
- who still had Benítez in charge
- a position in which he remained
- as the pair moved
- as the team had just promoted to the top flight
- he qualified the team for the final
- a 1–0 aggregate defeat
I am probably being rather picky, but there are several other sentences which are sloppily written.77.130.195.16 (talk) 05:58, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
Honours list
editAs the article makes reference to the large number of titles that he has won as a player, it would be good to have this added to the article (properly referenced of course). 77.130.195.16 (talk) 05:59, 20 June 2017 (UTC)