Talk:Margaret Thatcher/GA2

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Happyme22 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This article is great. Simply address the concerns I list below and I will pass the article. Ceran →(cheerchime →carol) 01:58, 20 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

References

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  • Links check out well, however ref # 94 is broken.

Prose

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  • Of the incident she wrote in her autobiography, "I learned a valuable lesson. I had incurred the maximum of political odium for the minimum of political benefit."[29] - Suggest re-wording of the incident to make a little more clear what you are referring to.
  • In section: Leader of the Opposition (1975–1979) - Could you convert the quote into a <blockquote> format or normal prose? It's not a requirement, but it's aesthetically better looking. I'd suggest just normal prose.
  • Five people were killed in the attack, including the wife of Cabinet Minister John Wakeham; a prominent member of the Cabinet, Norman Tebbit, was injured, and his wife Margaret was left paralysed. - paralyzed, not paralysed. Or is that British English? ;)
I have very little concerns on this article, and I love that you're trying to [possibly] feature a FFA. I wish you luck, and hope that I am able to pass this come seven days. Ceran →(cheerchime →carol) 01:58, 20 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
I believe that I have addressed your concerns. Thanks! --Happyme22 (talk) 18:18, 20 December 2008 (UTC)Reply