Talk:Lee Tzsche

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Daniel Quinlan in topic Biography issues

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Thank you for your correction, 64.142.88.2. In spite of poor English, I'll try to write some more. Please give me more help. ^^ --Zepelin 03:04, 1 April 2006 (UTC)Reply

Biography issues

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Parts of this section read like an advertisement or promotional piece rather than an article.

  • "short but impressive album with adolescent girl's feel to it" (POV)
  • "transitional album - it had an R&B or house sound with the producer Kim Hong-soon, but few fans appreciated the change." (POV)
  • "showed more musical maturity" (POV)
  • "'an introspective reflection.'" (no citation)
  • "It has been suggested that she did 'far better' in Japan than her native country, and she received wide name recognition and was regarded as an artist rather than a pop idol." (no citations)
  • "The rich and overlapped sound production showed her ambition as a music director." (POV and no citation)
  • "She returned to simple sounds in the 7th album" (no citation)
  • "she became a troubadour with a serene mood" (no citation)

It needs to be rewritten with most of this material removed or replaced with sourced and neutrally phrased text. Daniel Quinlan (talk) 20:24, 14 July 2023 (UTC)Reply