Talk:K-161 (Kansas highway)/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by 420Traveler in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:38, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
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- Thank you for adding instructions on how to use ref 1!
- "the U.S. State of Kansas." maybe "the state of Kansas, US."?
- "K-161's southern terminus" -> "Its southern...
- "Ancient Indian Traders Trail.[3]" only thing in the lead to be referenced? Do the ref in the main body, and hopefully there you can explain what the "Ancient Indian Traders Trail" is?
- Should be good now? -420Traveler (talk) 06:21, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
- "161 was designated as the Ancient Indian Traders Trail in 2014." didn't you say that already?
- Will this work? -420Traveler (talk) 06:21, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
- "at-grade crossing" what's that?
- "track then exits the" before exiting.
- "Road U then crosses" perhaps to avoid so many "then"s, we could mix every other one up with "before", i.e. "then crosses" -> "before crossing"?
- "designated as the Ancient Indian Traders Trail" as part of? Or is in its entirety? and what is that?
- Not sure how to best to write it, but k161 is the entire "Ancient Indian Traders Trail"
- Link bituminous.
- "1954 resolution" comma after 1954.
- Same for others.
- Looking back at the lead, and taking the table into account, perhaps you could do "17.0-mile-long (27.4 km)"
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:59, 9 September 2021 (UTC)