Talk:Juldarigi/GA1
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Reviewer: DepressedPer (talk · contribs) 03:44, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
This is something out of my wheelhouse but its a task I want to try and review. Give me a week to look it over and I'll decide how it turns out. DepressedPer (talk) 03:44, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
Having gone through the article, here's what I found:
- Refs. #1 and #6 are dead links; replace them with archive links.
- WP:OVERCITE on the Equipment section with Ref. #5.
The article as of now is very well-written; covers what the sport is and some refs are used well. The google books ones caught me off a bit but they serve their use well. I'll put it on hold to allow you to fix the problems I mentioned. Good luck. DepressedPer (talk) 04:38, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
- @DepressedPer: Okay, both of those issues are now fixed; thanks for flagging those up. Yunshui 雲水 19:40, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
- No problem. Everything looks up to par to be a GA now. Passed. DepressedPer (talk) 05:21, 4 August 2014 (UTC)