Talk:Jonathan Bing
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editKallosEsq 15:59, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
- Removed advertisement notation, as the article lists discrete facts not advertorial opinions such as "best legislator ever."
- Removed criticism without sources, I suggest criticism of the article's principal itself be placed in its own section and be specific to the principal themselves.
- Removed criticism of Assembly and Assembly leadership. Such criticism should be placed on Silver's page or the Assembly page.
I removed the weasel word "machine", and some redundant and red links. Bearian 14:42, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
Copyright
editThe text of the Jonathan Bing Wikipedia entry, last updated on February 14, 2011, is permitted by the Office of Assemblymember Jonathan L. Bing. Email notification to the appropriate Wikipedia email address from an email account associated with the Office of Assemblymember Jonathan L. Bing will verify this. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.173.5.39 (talk) 03:43, 16 February 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you. I will un-protect it. Bearian (talk) 20:54, 16 February 2011 (UTC)
Citations
editThe Office of Assemblymember Jonathan L. Bing requests that messages concerning impartiality and verification be removed. All information is accurate and verifiable. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.97.104.30 (talk) 19:38, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
As verified by the Office of Assemblymember Jonathan L. Bing, the issue concerning citations and source verification has been addressed and improved citations have now been included. All information is accurate, verifiable and sourced. Please remove such verification and citation messages from the top of the post. Thank you. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.97.104.30 (talk) 15:36, 4 April 2011 (UTC)
Phrasing
editBing is a third-generation East Sider whose family has lived in what is now the 73rd A.D. since 1960. I was having trouble following that sentence. Does anyone want to adjust it to make it clearer? Cleanelephant (talk) 01:16, 26 December 2011 (UTC)
Copyedit review
editNot copyedited because of several tags requesting further citations to verify statements made about a living person. --Greenmaven (talk) 09:28, 16 May 2012 (UTC)
COI
editFor what it's worth, I know the subject from NYSBA and was briefly a constituent; we are connected on social media. Bearian (talk) 20:46, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
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