Talk:John Philip Sousa Baton

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Kavyansh.Singh in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:46, 20 September 2021 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • "After Sousa's death" After his death.
  • "United States Marine Corps" link.
  • "17.15-inch" approximately and then you give its length to the nearest 1/100th of an inch?!
  • "eagle, globe, and anchor " our article capitalises this.
  • "Vice President" and "Speaker of the House of Representatives" could be linked.
  • Do we know which White House lawn, there are articles...
  • Non-English sources should use the language parameter.
  • The baton article is not linked from the navbox at the bottom, so either it needs to be added or the navbox needs to go.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:53, 27 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man – Done all, or replied above. Thanks a lot for all your GA reviews. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
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