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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 31 August 2020 and 8 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Zachcorliss. Peer reviewers: Blakebridges08, Morganjones1, Gmcarlisle.

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I did not know anything about Jarena Lee before reading this article, and I feel like I now have a much better understanding of her. The information you offered is compelling to read about, and I was surprised that I had never heard of her before. My only criticism is that the tone of the article comes across as more informal and less academic. It is also a little confusing in parts, like the "Early Life" section. Overall, you have added a lot to this article and have done a good job!Gmcarlisle (talk) 05:01, 19 November 2020 (UTC)Reply