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Auto-edded, checked for dupe WL, rv a few duplications and mad commas. All suggestive, rv as desired. A model of its kind. Thanks Keith-264 (talk) 10:02, 8 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
In the early life section, no need to link and provide the abbreviation again for Royal Air Force
I think this is a matter of preference. I treat the lede and article body as separate so use abbreviations for first usages in each instance. This follows my preference RE links. Zawed (talk) 10:40, 4 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
There are a fair number of links redundant to the lede scattered through out the article
As above, I think this is a matter of preference. I link a term on first mention in lede and first mention in article body. Wiki's dupelinks tool treats the lede and article body as separate and hence doesn't pick them up as dupe links. Zawed (talk) 10:40, 4 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
Link St Lucien Ferme, sortie, dogfight, fighter sweep, Dekheila
Done, except for St Lucien Ferme, for which there is no link. I have added mention of a nearby town that does have a link so that the reader can get a sense of location. Zawed (talk) 10:40, 4 August 2023 (UTC)Reply