Talk:Ipas (organization)

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NOTE: This reads like it was taken from a promotional flyer belonging to the organisation. I think it should be more objective. FLechdrop (talk) 17:17, 5 November 2019 (UTC)Reply

My group completely edited the existing page making it more informative rather than promotional (the Lead and History sections were rewritten). We also added information to the Areas of Focus section and a section on some other organizations that are run under Ipas. Ecassel (talk) 16:11, 4 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

I spot-checked article's history, Ecassel and FLechdrop. Indeed, it looked even more promotional, POV and thus "creepy" back in 2019 than it is now. However, it still looks bad, and even contains grammatical mistakes:

would provide different country's health systems...

What is of interest, it was pithier some years back, calling spade a spade.

I will thus restore such referenced parts showing what they actually do and edit the rest for style. Zezen (talk) 11:57, 13 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 26 August 2019 and 6 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ecassel, Mykelamo, MoniqueAlyese. Peer reviewers: EmmaJohn121, Lisakanbur, Paigehel.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 13:08, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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