Talk:Interstate 84 in Utah/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Admrboltz in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Imzadi1979 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 31 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    Just a few little comments below.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    Looks good.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    a caption for the map would be a good addition, otherwise all is good here.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    I'm passing since I'm confident that the prose will be touched up quickly. The comment about a future ACR hold though. Imzadi 1979  03:25, 31 December 2013 (UTC)Reply
Lead
  • "The highway enters Box Elder County near Snowville before becoming concurrent with I-15 in Tremonton before traveling south through Brigham City and Ogden." That could be split up or reworded to get rid of " ... before ... before ... "
RD
  • "This is expressed in terms of average annual daily traffic (AADT), a measure of traffic volume for any average day of the year." I've found it's better to just pipe a link in the next sentence along the lines of In 2012, UDOT calculated [[average annual daily traffic|on average]] that ..." than to try to add a quick explanation of AADT.
  • In general, there are some prose things I'd copy edit if this article were going to ACR, but for GA, I'm ok leaving them. I'll make an offer now to help c/e pre-ACR actually.