Talk:In the Zone/GA1
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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 01:34, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
Lead
edit- However, she started -> why however? She did in fact stop for 6 months. July to November Done
- Others criticized -> others however, criticized Done
- I won't hold it against you but you know I hate that 6 million thing
- lol, sorry!
- "Me Against the Music" and "Toxic" became worldwide hits, and "Everytime" peaked at number one in Australia and the United Kingdom -> change. Also it doesn't make such sense. "Everytime" was just as successful if not more so than MATM Done
- live appearances -> television Done
Background and development
edit- 4 million copies only in the United States -> take out only Done
- However, she revealed in November 2002 that she had started working on her next studio album -> again, that was six months later Done
- Spears's -> Spears' Done
Recording
edit- Shine was written by Timberlake or Spears? Done
- been a Madonna fan -> a fan of Madonna Done
Composition
edit- Great!
Critical reception
edit- Nice
Chart performance
edit- In the Zone sold 609,000 copies in the United States in its first week -> sold 609,000 during its first week of availability in the United States Done
- In the Zone debuted at number thirteen on the UK Albums Chart, where it stayed for forty-three weeks. -> sounds like it stayed at #13 for that long. Re-word Done
Singles
edit- According to MOS, I believe each single should not have its own paragraph. Bunch it like a regular section. Done
Promotion
edit- sued for trademark infringement -> why?
- added that it was for 'in the zone'. Done
Legacy
edit- while Aguilera "comes across like a natural-born skank -> lol, I love this :)
- Nice
- Overall great job! You are really improving, I really had a breeze reading through it. Great work :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 05:13, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks so much! Xwomanizerx (talk) 10:32, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- Overall great job! You are really improving, I really had a breeze reading through it. Great work :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 05:13, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- Passing :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 09:52, 13 March 2011 (UTC)