Talk:Hurricane Anna (1961)/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 02:44, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- "at least 18 homes were destroyed, 228 were damaged, and an additional 18 were left uninhabitable" - if they're uninhabitable, aren't they destroyed?
- I guess so--12george1 (talk) 04:31, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- Any more Belize damage? You say damage was reported, but don't go into detail.
- I searched for a while, through over 10 pages of Google. I even did I search in Spanish, but couldn't find anything else.--12george1 (talk) 04:31, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- "imagery showed a cloud mass near 10°N, 39°W." - where is this? Ditto with later lat/long readings
- Fixed--12george1 (talk) 04:31, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- "Early on July 20, ship reports indicated a developing circulation between Grenada and Trinidad.[3] Early on July 20, squalls on the former island produced wind gusts as strong as 50 mph (80 km/h)" - feel like these could be merged.
- Better?--12george1 (talk) 04:31, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- "The United States Weather Bureau issued tropical cyclone watches and warnings for Venezuela, Curaçao, Bonaire and Aruba.' - not backed up by ref 6
- Fixed--12george1 (talk) 04:31, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- Link "Belize Harbor" to Belize City, as that's where the port is.
- "In Belize Harbor, many ships and boats were moved upstream inland and Belize's Church Welfare Service began to ship clothing and other materials in anticipation of the aftermath of the hurricane. - what does the first clause have to do with the second part?
- That was random :P --12george1 (talk) 04:31, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
All in all, a decent (short) article. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:44, 4 December 2013 (UTC)