Talk:Human Nature (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 18:24, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• The official single cover image requires an alt, so please add one

Lead

• Please insert "recorded" in between "is a song" and "by American singer..."
• "The track was released on June 6, 1995, by Maverick Records as the fourth and final song from Bedtime Stories." --> "The track was released on June 6, 1995, by Maverick Records as the fourth and final single from Bedtime Stories."
• "...during the show in Istanbul." --> I think "during a show in Istanbul." would sound better

Background and release

• "Madonna wanted to tone down her explicit image. Her first attempt was to release the tender ballad "I'll Remember" from the soundtrack of the film With Honors.[1]" --> When did she release "I'll Remember"?
• Please link "Billboard" to its respective article

Recording and composition

• ""Human Nature" also received nine official remixes clocking a total of 53 minutes and 26 seconds." --> No source.
• "Most of the remixes turned the R&B sounding song into a house one." --> No source.
  • These are all sourced from the AllMusic source, I just made them inline. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 08:57, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Critical responses

• Now Scott Kearnan's source says "30 Ultimate Madonna Singles" so I would mention that the ranking was out of 30, and it happened to rank at 11.
• Please remove the link to "Billboard" here in Larry Flick's review

Chart performance

• All fantastic! Great work IndianBio!! :)

Music video

Development

• Nada enchilada! Great as well!

Release and reception

• "Louis Virtel from The Backlot ranked the video at number 22 on a list for "Madonna's 22 Best Videos", and called it "tongue-in-cheek, pleather-heavy"." --> The source says "Madonna's 55 Best Videos", not "Madonna's 22 Best Videos"; which one is it?
• What about this: "The music video also inspired the dancing and the video of the song "Kambaqt Ishq" from the 2001 Bollywood film, Pyaar Tune Kya Kiya.[60]" --> "The music video further inspired the dancing and the video of the song "Kambaqt Ishq" from the 2001 Bollywood film, Pyaar Tune Kya Kiya.[60]"

Live performances

• For the sake of specificities: "The performance was included on the Sticky & Sweet Tour live CD and DVD release, recorded during Madonna's shows in Buenos Aires, Argentina, in December 2008.[71]" --> "The performance was included on the Sticky & Sweet Tour live CD and DVD release, recorded during Madonna's four shows in Buenos Aires, Argentina, in December 2008.[71]" (State how many shows there were; what do you think?)

References

• I may be confused or something, but what is Billboard Book of Number 2 Singles doing in here?
  • Feldman's book sources the "I'll Remember" release, which had reached number 2 on Billboard and also explains how it was released for damage control of Madonna's image. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 08:57, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

End of GA Review:

Another great article that is worded expertly and with very few mistakes overall! On hold for seven days to allow for any changes to be made. Thanks and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:52, 29 June 2016 (UTC).

Finished the concerns. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 08:57, 29 June 2016 (UTC)