Talk:House of Flavors/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Doug Coldwell in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- For the infobox, I suggest using "plainlist" instead of <br />.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:38, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- The lead also needs to be expanded to better summarize the article.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:38, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
History
edit- Add a serial comma after "buttermilk".
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after "Park Dairy".
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- "to producing" → "on producing"
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Add a comma after "different varieties".
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Operations
edit- "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- "that features" → ", which features"
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- "popular to" → "popular in"
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Guinness Record attempt
edit- "[21] . [22][23][24]" → "[21][22][23][24]"
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Those videos near the bottom look messy on my screen and I'm not sure if they're necessary.
- Done Organized section for better display of picture and videos.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
References
edit- There are multiple references with [dead permanent link] tags, so I would find replacements.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Archive all archivable (either manually or with this tool).
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:33, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
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