Talk:Hormizd III/GA1

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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 17:20, 6 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

I have made a couple of minor copy edits.
Daryaee is not used as a source. Should he be under 'See also'?
"who is called unfair". I have no idea what this means. Would it be possible to rephrase?
"this is most likely a legend, and is disproved by other sources" If it is "disproved" then it is definitely a legend. You need to reword here. (Maybe "disproved" -> 'contradicted'?)

Changed unfair -> unjust. I've also added Daryaee as a source and changed disproved -> contradicted. --HistoryofIran (talk) 17:34, 6 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

That all looks good to me. A fine little article. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:54, 6 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

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