Talk:Holocene (Portland, Oregon)/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Another Believer in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 13:19, 27 September 2019 (UTC)Reply


Go on then, I'll take a look at this later. First comment I'd make, just scanning through, is that the lead looks a bit short. Harrias talk 13:19, 27 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Harrias, Thanks. Let me know if there's anything specific needing to be incorporated into the lead. I think the current version provides a general overview, but I'm happy to expand as needed. ---Another Believer (Talk) 13:26, 27 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
Lead
  • "..in Portland, Oregon's Buckman neighborhood in the United States." I guess this might be common parlance in AmEng, but it sounded a bit odd to me. Would you consider rephrasing it "..in the Buckman neighborhood of Portland, Oregon, in the United States"?
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Reception
  • Are there any older reviews that can be included here; ideally on its reception at opening.

Otherwise, all very neat and tidy. Harrias talk 10:49, 2 October 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thank you! ---Another Believer (Talk) 11:20, 2 October 2019 (UTC)Reply
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