Talk:Hina Rabbani Khar/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 16:50, 14 January 2013 (UTC)

Hi Zia! I will review this article tomorrow. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 16:50, 14 January 2013 (UTC)

• "The PPP secured a plurality of the ... Yousaf Raza Gillani as Prime Minister." - Reference needed.
• "She was appointed foreign minister ... ran high over the Raymond Davis incident."- Again ref needed.
• S. M. Krishna is the common name
• who said --> which said
• When Khar herself said that Pakistan has "regretted its actions in 1971," then why is the word "alleged" used?
• The word genocide should link to 1971 Bangladesh atrocities and Liberation War of 1971 should be Bangladesh Liberation War.
• Mention that Sheikh Hasina is the Bangladeshi PM.
• Use Pakistani Rupees instead of Rupees.
• Expand NRO.
• It was not the Indian newspapers which alleged the romantic affair.
• This has a lot of information which needs to be added. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 11:37, 15 January 2013 (UTC)

I'm busy right now and'll do this by the weekend. Thanks, Zia Khan 17:12, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

• All of the above concerns have been addressed. Thanks for the review. Zia Khan 14:51, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

•  Done Article passed. Congrats. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 10:47, 21 January 2013 (UTC)