Talk:Alex Stuart-Menteth

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Latest comment: 10 years ago by MrWooHoo in topic GA Review
Good articleAlex Stuart-Menteth has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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July 8, 2014Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on July 6, 2014.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Commander Alex Stuart-Menteth read his own obituary in the newspaper?

GA Review

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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 15:17, 8 July 2014 (UTC)'Reply

This should be another quick review, just like the last review.


Review

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  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:  
    Some prose issues, will be addressed in the section labeled "Comments"
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
    Lead's length is great, and the rest of the article does follow MOS.
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:  
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    Fantastic images, tagged with copyyright status.
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: 
    See Comments below. Brandon (MrWooHoo)Talk to Brandon! 15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC)Reply
    Comments addressed, quick-pass. Brandon (MrWooHoo)Talk to Brandon! 15:38, 8 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

Comments

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Redlinks are not required to be fixed, but if you don't mind fixing them that would be great!

Also, could the following quote be put into a quote box, like the one in Ernest Radcliffe Bond?

I vaguely remember being hauled out of the water, but must have passed out, and when I came to, I was lying on the deck in the German destroyer's wardroom. I remember seeing a picture of Hitler on the wall facing me." (You forgot to put a period at the end of the quote, which I did for you.)

That's all I got to say ;) Brandon (MrWooHoo)Talk to Brandon! 15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

Haha, another quick-pass :D! You work really hard on your articles for GA ;) Brandon (MrWooHoo)Talk to Brandon! 15:37, 8 July 2014 (UTC)Reply