Talk:HMS King George V (1911)
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic Prose suggestions
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for comment on HMS Audacious I modified page to say off "northern coast of Ireland", instead of "off coast of Northern Ireland". The main reason for this is that HMS Audacious sunk off the coast of Donegal (which is not part of Northern Ireland) and the wreck is in Irish Territorial Waters. -Paul
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 19:26, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
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Prose suggestions
edit- "King George V class was powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines, " perhaps "ships of the King George V class were powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines," or else simply the King George Vs were powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines.
- "By April 1917, the 4-inch guns had been removed from the hull casemates as they were frequently unusable in heavy seas." Might wish to add in salutary in front of "4 inch guns".
- That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:06, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
- All done. Your reviews are much appreciated.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:56, 30 March 2017 (UTC)