Talk:HMS Bedford (1901)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 02:54, 5 August 2018 (UTC)Reply


This article is in good shape. I have a few comments/queries:

  • what was her range?
    • Not given.
  • her guns need the adj field added so they render as "6-inch" instead of "6 inches"
  • do we know where the TTs were positioned? Broadside?
  • the belt range in the infobox isn't covered in the body
  • the infobox says turrets and barbettes were 5", but the body says 4"?
  • link Ship commissioning for recommissioned?
  • should 3/5s be three-fifths per WP:FRAC?
  • "in the side of the boiler room"?
  • "began to improve her ordered"
  • suggest "items" instead of "things"
  • should it be "dismissed from their ship"?
    • Ordinarily yes, but it's quoted that way in the source; a legacy of Georgian English, I expect.
  • the image is PD and has an appropriate tag.

That's me done. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:24, 5 August 2018 (UTC)Reply