Talk:HMS Audacious (1869)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Anotherclown in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Anotherclown (talk) 11:52, 10 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Progression

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  • Version of the article when originally reviewed: [1]
  • Version of the article when review was closed: [2]

Technical review

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Criteria

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  • It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    • I think you may be missing a comma in this sentence: "She relieved her sister Iron Duke in Singapore and later collided with a merchant ship during a typhoon in Yokohama." I'm no expert on such matters but maybe try: "She relieved her sister Iron Duke in Singapore, and later collided with a merchant ship during a typhoon in Yokohama."
    • This sentence seems a little long and complicated to me: "In April 1904 she was renamed Fisgard (after the French translation of the Welsh town Fishguard), and until she was towed to Scapa Flow in 1914 after the start of the First World War to be used as a receiving ship and renamed Imperieuse." I'm not entirely sure by what you mean with "and until she was towed". Maybe reword?
  • It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  • It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  • It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  • It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
    a (tagged and captioned):   b (Is illustrated with appropriate images):   c (non-free images have fair use rationales):   d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain':