Talk:George Reginald Starr
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editThis page was created using material taken from a web site owned by the contributor, namely http:/www.the-orvieto.co.uk — Preceding unsigned comment added by Petermanchester (talk • contribs) 18:06, 11 November 2003 (UTC)
Ambiguity: accuser or perpetrator?
editUnder the heading World War II is the sentence:
Starr was accused of the torture and brutal treatment of collaborators and prisoners by one of his couriers Anne-Marie Walters.
Are we to understand that courier Anne-Marie Walters was the abuser, or, rather, Starr's accuser? If the latter, possibly to word as follows:
Starr was accused by Anne-Marie Walters, one of his couriers, of the torture and brutal treatment of collaborators and prisoners.
If the latter version is consistent with the facts, I suggest its substitution for the former. -- Deborahjay (talk) 12:28, 20 May 2012 (UTC)