Talk:Gaddam Padmaja Reddy

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Cielquiparle in topic Did you know nomination

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for creating the article!.

✠ SunDawn ✠ (contact) 03:29, 19 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk17:54, 5 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Created by DaxServer (talk). Self-nominated at 11:36, 21 November 2022 (UTC).Reply

  I think those are much better hooks than the original, but I think I'll also ask for a second opinion here with regards to reader intrigue. I've struck ALT1 per the above discussion, so I'm only leaving ALTs 2 and 3 for consideration. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:43, 7 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
alt3 seems a little cluttered to me. would the following work instead?

alt3a: ... that the first dancer from Telangana to be conferred with India's highest award for performing arts, Gaddam Padmaja Reddy, is an exponent of Kuchipudi classical dance?

alternatively, here is something completely different.

alt4: ... that classical dances of Gaddam Padmaja Reddy, recipient of India's highest award for performing arts, explore contemporary social issues such as female foeticide and HIV/AIDS?

dying (talk) 07:53, 21 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
ALT4 is pretty good! Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:03, 21 December 2022 (UTC)Reply