Talk:Fremantle Fortress

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Calistemon in topic Second most important sub base

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk03:05, 4 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Created by Calistemon (talk). Self-nominated at 07:55, 4 May 2020 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   New enough and long enough, well-written, neutral and seems free of plagiarism (Earwig stands at 35.1% but that's mostly due to proper nouns like names of the batteries, military units etc). Hook cited and interesting, and QPQ done. Looks good to go to me. Having written a number of articles about the fortifications of Malta myself, I found the article quite interesting - well done! Xwejnusgozo (talk) 09:37, 11 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

  •   Hi, I came by to promote this, and while the article is interesting, the hook is not. A fortress was named after a harbor? This is not "hooky" enough to reel in readers to click on the link. Please say something catchy about the fortress itself. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 11:48, 2 June 2020 (UTC)Reply
  •   I had originally approved this on the basis that "fortress" tends to refer to a single fortification rather than a network of fortifications spread out on a relatively large area. However, I agree that the new hook is better, and it seems OK since it's cited, interesting and included in the article. Seems good to go. Xwejnusgozo (talk) 11:35, 3 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Second most important sub base

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...after (which one)? The most important sub base in the Pacific should be named or a link to an appropriate list provided. Jehochman Talk 11:01, 10 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Jehochman See bottom of Background section, where it states ... with it becoming the second-most significant Allied submarine base, after Pearl Harbor. Calistemon (talk) 01:13, 11 June 2020 (UTC)Reply