Talk:Felix Römer

Latest comment: 6 years ago by K.e.coffman in topic GA Review
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October 12, 2018Good article nomineeListed
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that historian Felix Römer found that 116 of 137 German World War II combat divisions he researched implemented the Commissar Order, contrary to postwar denials?

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Reviewer: Catrìona (talk · contribs) 08:21, 11 October 2018 (UTC)Reply


I'll take a look at this article as well. Catrìona (talk) 22:41, 9 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • were murdered by regular troops (not the SS) by May 1942 Recommend alternate phrasing, and clarify that they were shot after surrender was accepted. Perhaps "... were shot by Wehrmacht (not SS) units after their surrender was accepted." The emphasis on not the SS comes across as slightly POV.
Revised. --K.e.coffman (talk) 01:03, 12 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • sporadic objections to the order were not fundamental I think this could be clarified. By "fundamental" you mean "in principle", "principled", "humanitarian" or due to respect for the rule of law, but I'm not sure which.
Revised. --K.e.coffman (talk) 01:03, 12 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • believed in a victory for even longer is "even" necessary here?
Removed. --K.e.coffman (talk) 01:03, 12 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • Fix harv errors with Staas and Romer, classified as unused sources.
Moved to further reading. --K.e.coffman (talk) 01:03, 12 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
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