Talk:Fat Bear Week
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Wiki Education assignment: Introduction to Information Studies
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 January 2023 and 11 March 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Acntaos (article contribs).
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Wiki Education assignment: Introduction to Information Studies
edit This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 21 August 2023 and 15 October 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Wikinewbie105 (article contribs).
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Wiki Education assignment: Introduction to Information Studies
edit This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 October 2023 and 16 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mothman81 (article contribs).
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Tone
editI adjusted the tone a little, but I still feel that it reads a bit wrong. I am rather new to edits of this type and would like a second set of eyes on this, if at all possible. Cmrc23 (talk) 08:30, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- (Hi, I added the template.) Your edit was a substantial improvement—thank you—but you're correct that there are some spots remaining. For example:
This vast area features numerous lakes, rivers teeming with red salmon, diverse wildlife, notably the Alaska brown bear...
Compare that to the matter-of-fact tone of the lede of the article about Katmai itself.encourage positive human-nature interactions through the utilization of live webcams strategically placed along the Brooks River.
Simply too many words.
- There might be more I've missed, and I'm not a MOS expert, so I'd go so far as to call in a third set of eyes. But, anyway, I appreciate your help cleaning this article up. Ursus arctos californicus (talk) 05:28, 3 October 2024 (UTC)